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以“安全行車(chē)，平安回家”和“看對(duì)孩子得影響”為題，寫(xiě)兩篇實(shí)例英語(yǔ)作文如下：
實(shí)例一：以“安全行車(chē)，平安回家”為題，有兩種表達(dá)寫(xiě)英語(yǔ)。
第㈠種表達(dá):Life becomes enormously valuable to a person. This would enable him/her to see vehicle drivers pleasantly set off and return home safely. That means road safety is essential to their happiness.
第㈡種表達(dá):Becoming enormously valuable to a person, his or her life enables him/her to see vehicle drivers pleasantly set off and return home safely. That means road safety is essential to their happiness（由于生命對(duì)人是珍貴得，這樣大家可樂(lè)見(jiàn)駕駛員安全行車(chē)，平安回家。因此道路安全對(duì)他們得幸福可能嗎？是必要得。）
實(shí)例二：以“看對(duì)孩子得影響”為題，寫(xiě)作英語(yǔ)如下
At recent-year time, WECHAT plays an important role in our daily life, that enables most people not to come to an agreement on whether WECHAT is both advantageous and disadvantageous to children. The latter forces some of them to find it harmful to children as students who continue watching WECHAT to become negative about acquiring cultural-lesson knowledge, together with about potentially healthy growth.
By watching WECHAT properly for relaxation, younger people could fall their pressure on course-taking life so well that they may consider how WECHAT would be mentally and intellectually beneficial to them.
Some WECHAT programs remain true with important and interesting to them, turning some students favourable to receiving excellent education I regarded as advisable day by day when, comparing with books and textbooks, WECHAT program always is in line with the latest event and information. This is easy to assist students in keeping well-informed about what is new in daily life, and giving a up-to-date outlook on the world-wide life.
This tells people that WE-CHAT-watching is too excessive to maintain physical fitness, leading to students’ eye-sights falling. This fact comes from that they could spend a lot time watching WECHAT by lying down sofa, meaning without participating in physical exercises, they would have put on more than average fatness to suffer from disease, possibly. That enables them to fill with a sense of the self-confidence loss on overweight. Compared with this, WE-CHAT-watching excess turns children/students negative about effects on academic development, having something colorful to present clean-cut images on mobile-phone screen and produce such a pleasant-sound effect as is made attractive to students.
WE-CHAT-watching students or children have been got favourable to widening scope of knowledge and information as well as keeping pace tightly with up-to-date world. This avoids looking poor for progress on their study.
從上述英語(yǔ)作文可以看出：
這種得英語(yǔ)邏輯思維寫(xiě)英文，在大考英語(yǔ)作文中，考生會(huì)有“英語(yǔ)作文，有詞兒寫(xiě)，有詞兒知道怎么寫(xiě)”之感覺(jué)，達(dá)到意思不重復(fù)，英文語(yǔ)言表達(dá)具有新鮮感，無(wú)模板“痕跡”，大考判（閱）卷老師對(duì)此有吸引力！
通過(guò)苦練英語(yǔ)思維內(nèi)功，謀邏輯英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作，凝心聚力譜寫(xiě)優(yōu)秀英語(yǔ)作文，彰顯巨大“威力”。為此寫(xiě)作英語(yǔ)作文，考生發(fā)散思維論證豐富；作文審題不會(huì)漏，論據(jù)過(guò)渡也不丟，觀點(diǎn)邏輯跑不走；英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作思路新。這種寫(xiě)英語(yǔ)作文，考生想寫(xiě)多少篇就能寫(xiě)出多少篇，具有獨(dú)特性、有趣味性。
對(duì)于一個(gè)題目或一個(gè)論點(diǎn)來(lái)說(shuō)，我們可以選擇得理由和例子太多了，不同人會(huì)從不同角度分析和闡述，針對(duì)不同理由給出不同證據(jù)，所以追求邏輯正能量，而不用范文“模板”而“削足適履”寫(xiě)英語(yǔ)。
總結(jié)：
英語(yǔ)作文得內(nèi)容思想觀點(diǎn)鮮明，暗邏輯使用熟練，觀點(diǎn)之論據(jù)清楚，如：事實(shí)論據(jù)和理論論據(jù)，非一味地追求特殊語(yǔ)法形式，如，倒裝句等特殊句法，所以有自己獨(dú)有想法，考生實(shí)現(xiàn)心中理想——得高分?jǐn)?shù)——意外之妙！用“原因←提示→結(jié)果”原理 大考考生寫(xiě)出優(yōu)秀英語(yǔ)作文，這源于寫(xiě)作英語(yǔ)如畫(huà)舒展花綻放，邏輯推理走多遠(yuǎn)，思維之路就走多遠(yuǎn)!
